Saturday, February 14, 2009

Revision





Does this feel better? I'm not sure I like all the changes, but I'm working on it.

5 comments:

GhostMane said...

I think so but I think the type needs some work. The spacing between the the and Tempest seems too large, move the the closer and let the ligature interact with the T. It just reads funny, and I wish you would hand draw the font and give it some more weight because it sorta disappears when you squint. Plus I don't think you need all the ligatures (the one on the end of the e in "the"). They are meant to help your eye flow from letter to letter but some of them are doing the opposite (the mpest especially). Sorry if this is hyper critical but I am a type demon. But I like the newer painting much better. The girl reminds me of the character from the PS3 game Heavenly Sword. I do wish that there was more emotion in her face. I know nothing about the play but I am guess she is pissed and I don't get that. And I wish the blue color was brought down further into the hair towards her face more, randomly. Awesome work

Valerie said...

I like the colors in the one on the left, but I don't love the necklace part. I don't want to get all literal on you, but Miranda has been living on that island for a long time, I don't think she's got a lot of accessories.

Craig said...

What Tyson said, exactly what I was thinking. Especially about the fonts. I was all like Ligature blah blah blah.

Mike Laughead said...

Reference...
http://image62.webshots.com/62/7/18/70/447771870VqWbPN_fs.jpg

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y282/JunkFeud/lindsay/lindsaylohan-london7.jpg

http://flickr.com/photos/sjbequeath/663875178/sizes/l/

http://thumbs.dreamstime.com/thumb_282/1214260393JqF0a2.jpg

http://images.inmagine.com/img/imagesource/is650/is650009.jpg

Allen TenBusschen said...

tyrone, you sir are a meanie. thanks for the critique though, <3