So this is the first real assignment for illustration class, as you can see I've painted it twice, I wasn't happy at all with the first one. I'm not sure I like the second one, but it could be that I have been looking at it for the last like 2 days. Tell me what you think, do you like aspects of the 1st one? Any changes to the 2nd one? Am I gay for listening to the Hello Dolly! soundtrack?